All Comments on 'A Game of Consequences Ch. 01'

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MrJohnnySirMrJohnnySir5 months ago

"Meanwhile, a pebble dropped, and the ripples started to spread."

Great line, at the right time.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lovely premise.

All back story, but very effective.

Five stars.

P_AndererP_Anderer5 months ago

It's so refreshing to read such quality writing on LE. Thank you, 5*. Onto the next part!!

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I hope you're all enjoying my most recent posts - Consequences 9 and Sarah's introduction, with the long-awaited Chapter 12 of Mr Big which should go live any day now. Consequences 10 should be out soon, together with some other stories awaiting completion and/or 'polishing'....

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