by Lifestyle66
Who is the troll here? the writer wasting thier time writing this pathetic story or the readers expressing thier own opinion which is what the site owners want. It seems the readers opinions are not to the writers liking.
Exquisite. A superior piece of fiction that has no equal on this site. Whoever has deemed to bestow your story with such a low score truly is a person of very low breeding and probably replicates your characters. They should be mocked incessantly for their inferior intellect.
Well done, Sir. A deserved five-star effort.
Nice to see virgins trying to write sex stories. Keep on trying and you will improve with experience. Experience as in some slut hard up with limited options, having a self esteem crisis and high as shit decides to relieve you of your cherry in a mercy hump so you know what the hell you are talking about.
OMG The comments are better than the story!
"Nice to see virgins trying to write sex stories." written by someone who clearly didn't notice the mirror that was being held up in front of his/her/its face
"WTF? A loser writer writing about loser "kids"" posted by someone who hasn't had the guts to post anything himself
"Who is the troll here?" Posted by someone who clearly hasn't reached the S's in the dictionary where "Satire" is hidden.
Masterfully done Sir Lifestyle!
I think you overestimated the intelligence of BTB trolls. Forming complete sentences is beyond them.
Man ... messed up associates! Trolls calling out gangbangers like that and wanting more of what they saw at the end of the pitiful diatribe. Like their gang name, they deserve to be called troll bait! The dude, Aaron, doesn't even have a key to his own basement door! WTF. Where is the BTB desperately called for element? Cowards all. You deserve every score you get ... a pathetic group of lawn boys. Probably couldn't even piss out a fire if they had to! Geez, you could use a bit of troll bait coaching ... Bait and switch move, in the beginning, was really evil trickery.
I'd give you a zero for lack of imagination but then some horse's ass already gave you a five hoping to keep this from going into ground zero and just ruined the opportunity. I need a cup of good coffee to get over this!
How disappointing. Here I thought this was going to be a story about the Authors Hangout.
Oh the stinging comments from asshole ir provocateurs like Gpuss, and bitter, impotent, old gay cucks like Ic69hunter. I’m wounded until death.
Lame comments from ir provocateur Gpuss, and the impotent old bi cuck Ic69hunter himself.
Great vignette! A bit "on the nose" perhaps in making its point, but the characters are funny and well-drawn