All Comments on 'A Ghostly Affair'

Fantastic story!!! I hope we get to read about more of Isabella’s adventures! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

A wonderful first story for you! What a great backstory, and a very interesting character whom I hope we will meet again. The whole thing was actually pretty romantic! 5 Stars.

Thanks @G5902. I am excited to see what Isabella gets up to as well ;)

This was my first Erotic Horror story I've read, and I loved it!!! Such a connection!! For me a fantastic story

fantastic story. I read all of the genres and really enjoy the horror ones and this one was fantastic thank you cannot wait for more.

Nicely done!

There is certainly something about a graveyard setting!

Just one thing that confused me where did "Anna" come from?

@Bazzle, good point. I guess I tried to infer that she was there to try connect with lost souls or help them pass on. That wasn’t very clear because I wasn’t really clear when I wrote it :) Maybe I’ll expand on that if I continue to write about her…which k might, because I like her!

First two paragraphs need some editing for flow. But great concept, very nicely realised. Great details and descriptions. Only thing missing is a bit more tension and emotion from the characters. Is she afraid or aroused? Surprised? No idea at this point. Take your time, slow is sexy. This concept would be a great series. Like an adult version of the Ghost Whisperer!

A great read.