All Comments on 'A Gift for Henry'

by CharlieSaint

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LimeyracerLimeyracer11 months ago

Excellent story - beautifully written and a surprising closure - or - is it a 'new beginning for Kate and Sylvie?

A word to Henry: "Be careful for what you ask!"...

CES

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I loved this story .., it beautiful to see true love bloom unexpectedly

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hottest story that I have read for years. Very erotic and beautifully crafted .,

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

wow! what a great read! 5 Stars and saved!

lazy_readerlazy_reader11 months ago

The details make this story. Beautiful.

DingbatwizardDingbatwizard11 months ago

I laughed out loud out at the 'unfurled legs'. Does she have umbrellas down there?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Well paced seduction, an interesting storyline with a satisfying twist at the end. Tres bon!

SiteNonSiteSiteNonSite11 months ago

"How did you know?"

"I didn't. I hoped."

That’s where you got me, but I am so glad I stuck around to read the rest. You are a marvelous writer. I am very much looking forward to reading more of your stories.

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