All Comments on 'A Gift for Samantha'

erotic, but needs a follow-on story

Nothing worse than a willing fucked up cuck story. So os the skank going to let the husband fuck a young coed?

felt like it was lacking some drama, emotion, or something. Was pretty wham bam and that is it. I think ending together, husband and wife, would add more. Also if he was also getting a massage like that with a sexy woman it would be better then the one sided wham bam.

Written to cold, no emotional content. Two stars.

Some typos but not enough to kill the story, but an editor would help you with the story AND typos, including NOT having the ending rushed as it seemed to be.

You could write another Part, that lets us know what happened, since this was too much like "...and everyone kissed and made up, and then they lived happily ever after !"

Continuing on, she could have an emotional crisis as to the masseur (a masseuse is a woman) satisfying her more than her husband could... what happens next ?

Does she go home and never thinks about the bigger-cocked, better lover, or is she SO HAPPY and satisfied, that she never thinks of anyone but her husband again, nor does she ever have sex with anyone but hubby... see the possibilities ?

not even remotely erotic, just some asshole pimping out his cum dumpster wife to a service worker.

Okay, first of all, get an editor. There are at least two dozen typos. Secondly, your use of repetitive words is exceptionally distracting. Never describe the same feature twice in the same paragraph, nor use redundant adjectives. Combining all three makes you sound as if you're poorly educated. On top of that, you dumped a typical troop on us with no story build-up or emotional investments. She went to the store and got fucked... that was the whole story... not good.

Did he buy her a massage or was he intending to be a cuck? The willing slut certainly enjoyed it.

Next week she finds out she got a STD! And she blames her husband for being a cheating whore!

Good story. The title caught my attention. My husband treats me to a fuck massage with one of two masseurs we have chosen and engaged multiple times. It's a win-win-win because I get a wonderful fucking, the masseur gets a blow job and fuck, and my husband is thrilled by watching. Life is good.

Lovely story. Great massage.

Interesting but there is always the potential for problems down the road!

4

This is really hot. I took my wife for an erotic massage here at home, near Harrisburg and stayed in the room while he massaged her . Toward the end he worked his way down over her breasts and onto her mound hooking his finger into her slit and rubbing her clit. After about 4 or 5 minutes of this she has a massive orgasm and said she needed to get fucked. I told her she could use the masseur but he declined saying he simply could not go that far in his studio for fear of losing his license.She wanted it and he obviously had a hardon while massaging her. We got in the car outside in broad daylight and fucked like rabbits.