All Comments on 'A Gift From the Empress'

They're just jealous they couldn't come up with a story as enjoyable as yours.

Love to read futanari stories and this rates up with the best so far. Sarah is in store for some wild times and adventures, right? Looking forward to more chapters.

Best regards,

Santacruzman

Please it would improve your works more if you could find a way to really proofread them before you submit them, they really contribute to further enhancing the reading experience as a whole. Aside from that this was a wicked tease, if you seek more

experience in this field the I would suggest you peruse other authors's works and appraoch them with an open mind. So for no

w it's see you l8r.

I would like to thank you all for your nice comments.

To anon: I have noticed some mistakes myself and I am hitting myself over the head for them. I will search for someone to proofread, if someone is interested please let me know.

to Santacruzman: Thank you for your support and yes she is in for some wild times. I am not 100% sure how I want to continue on with Sarah's story but I have some more story ideas when it comes to this world in general

I love futra story. Great job with it

I think you've created a story you can take in many different directions. I like it a lot. I know in the beginning you mentioned the possibility of errors but any errors I found weren't enough to distract me from the story. I'm looking forward to the next part

Thank you for your 1st work and it was fun to read. Keep up the work with the two main characters and don,'t be shy with new characters.

Sequel please?

I am not normally one for futa stories. But a good story is a good story regardless of the type. This falls into that category. Love the plot and the characters. Yes there are some editing issues. Work on fixing those in the future. But definitely continue with this series and writing.

I was thoroughly surprised at how you have the story play out. Although something to try in the future is more physical descriptions i.e. height, skin color, eye color, etc. These help readers like me really connect with your characters. Otherwise, I would love to see a sequel for this.

It just astounds me how stories like these make me wish they were reality,to have Sarah be introduced to Empress Lana and suddenly have a choice of either being impregnated or given her own Futa Cock is just insane yet fantastic.

Sarah must have really Wow'd Empress Lana to get a second and third invite,now Sarah can go fuck her Mother and her Crush anytime she wants with her beautiful cock thanks to Lana.I hope Sarah can use her cock to impregnate other girls and women so they can have their own futa babies and eventually turn the whole population into Futanari's and be able to get pregnant.Futa's are beautiful creatures no matter how you look at it.