All Comments on 'A Girl Named Desire Ch. 02'

5 stars

Literotica has a Valentine's day contest. If you had a stand alone story with these characters, you could enter that. It would like mean 15,000 to 20,000 people would read your story, instead of the 1,500 to 2,000 people.

This second part far outshines the first, IMO. Nice little scene and certainly a story that could be built on with more adventures for these two ;) Agree with the comment below; as you go forward in your writing, the contests do lead to a lot of new readers discovering your works.

I've finally gotten through. This story got me so worked up it has taken 5 attempts to finish it. The switch of who is in control was sexy as hell. Thank you and I can't wait to see what's next! -Isa

The first of your work I’ve read and lived every second

I loved this follow up to part 1 and how they switched roles. How it made him question whether he might actually enjoy being the “prey”. I do not know much about this lifestyle, but if u are lucky enough to experience with someone you can trust, I am for sure gonna read more about it. Very intriguing and made me wet. 🍒

Wow most impressive I can’t decide which chapter I like more, but be sure I can’t wait for chapter three! TRK 69