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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 4 years ago

Deli...cious! No lust à la carte, but a three-course menu of homemade passion and love.

Thanks for sharing, in particular that salacious dual-use of chocolate. It will never be just sweets again.

GoofyRobGoofyRobalmost 4 years ago
Its enticing

The away you tell your stories. AlwAys that sleight distance. Expertly told. What now??

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 1 year ago

What a gift to have things expand and overflow convention in such a seamless way without losing all the respect and passionate kindness that has driven this story from the beginning.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

This part would make a delicious play.

Imagine watching their magic, their sensual dance in an intimate theatre. xox

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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