by davion2308
Barry doesn't love or respect her and no long tearm plans,so the slut fucks his friend, no big deal.
She isn't a shared girlfriend, she's a convienient slut. A girlfriend implies some kind of commitment. What she has with Barry is convienient. No emotion. This story could be great if you included something that let us know either Barry or what's-her-cunt had any emotion.
Don't let those stick-in-the-mud blowhards deter you. This was a good story with a good little plot. Keep writing more, I'm sure Megan has more to share.
I wrote this story and I'm proud of what I created. It was a first time getting outside my usual line of thinking and I believe I did rather well. Thanks for reading, even if you didn't like it the most!
Well sorry to burst your bbble but you are not as good as you think.
It wasn't a great story but not bad at all. Keep on trying. And for the record, I want to know what Mr. Stick in the Mud has written for us.
I was on the shy side like Jim and wish I had someone like Barry's girl to learn from long ago, or even now for that matter.