All Comments on 'A Girl's Fairy Tale Dream Come True Ch. 19'

This is a great story line, but the grammar is getting progressively worse. Don't blow it by not asking for help.

I have used an editor. The one from LIT has yet to get back to me after emailing me telling me it would be only 2 weeks. That was back in July and August. I would still be waiting to submit. Point the problem spots out to me by sending me a personal email it may have only been an oversight. We are all human after all. Thank you for your comments, reading and vote.