All Comments on 'A Goddess on the Island of Elysium'

After the second and third times you could not keep David the husband to Goddess Deborah from calling him Tony in the same paragraph I just stopped reading the story. Sorry but this it's really a big turn off for me as a writer and reader. Make an outline for the story draft and refer to it for story line and characters development.

Very nicely written it is great to read a story of female Domination that gets it right!

You should DEFINITELY write more FemDom stories! You're a natural.

Well done story, although I would have liked to have seen more sex and in a more descriptive manner. I hope there are other installments coming our way.