All Comments on 'A Good Deed Turns To a Good Fuck'

With no context to where their spouses fit in emotionally, no explanation where Ashley’s three kids are, or what day/time would have them both at home it was hard to fully buy into the story. Decent shower scene, but no plot depth. 3.4*

Nothing to see here.

Please keep moving.

No real back story, but good concept

The Shower Scene Rocks! So many horny women, and so little time. Wish I was 30 again with so many young women just giving it away. But then again, I'm glad I'm not also, because that would also mean I would be trying to keep my Hottie from screwing around. LOL The Benefits of being old are few, but having an older wife without any sex drive herself means a lot less chance of her screwing around. LOL No One Gets Any! Thanks, Buster2U

What to say about this? Just 1*

Nothing better than knocking up a married woman. Great story!!!

How do I tell my readers that I'm a fat slob living in my parents basement without saying that I'm a fat slob living in my parents basement?

"My name is Jack and I am a 30 year old married man. I'm 5'10" and I'm in great shape from going to the gym five days a week and running three times a week. I have a wife and kids and a normal nine-to-five job."

Should have warned us what a piece of shit Jack is. A bit of a fantasy, too. Ashley has three kids yet her breasts sit high on her chest, plus how tight she is. OK.

What the Greek guy said.

Dewey Cheatham

Amoral, for sure.

Simply a vehicle to transport an affair. It could have been any plausible setting. Jack could actually been a plumber, it doesn't matter what jobs anyone has or how many kids they have or anything. You just needed Jack to have a reason to be alone with Ashley. So it's a sex scenario only, not a story about people.

"and my wife"?

Did you forget that part?

This is just some schooboly fantasy. No feelings. No personality. No eroticism.

Good story. This one needs at least a part 2, if not a series to see how everything works out for everyone.

Really .you call this a story??

Nice introduction to some unidimensional characters. Nice plot for a gonzo scene but not much else.

Cheating assholes go to school.

Definitely needs a part 2 or a series of stories. Find out if they both get impregnated and how they raise their children. If they ladies ever find out they have been sharing Jack and maybe have a threesome at some point.

Hell yes, love a good fuck, better yet two hot fucks within hours of each other. Quick flowing steamy story!

Maybe they'll be in the same class together and people may ask if they are blood related. What a swinging dick. How long can it last?

why stop at two? there's more future moms at that school. loved the story

Loved this story lots of hot sex and a loving wife

Keep going. Ready for part 2. More descriptors of Ashley and Mary

Reminds me of my own experiences a few years back when I was having an affair and my then wife and then girlfriend lived in the same city about 2 miles from each other. There were many times when I would have sex with both of them on the same day. Sometimes within an hour or less of each other. There’s nothing like getting your cock sucked and fucked by 2 different mouths and pussies in the same morning before going to the office.

The "Rest of the Story"?

Great story Needs a part two at least. 4.7

Ashley gets a divorce and Mary accepts Ashley?

Will Ashley and Mary become sister wives?

We can only hope.

It’s always hot when you fuck two different women in the same day, but you’d think his wife would have noticed the difference between her husband’s first fuck of the day, and what she got.

All it needs now. Is the scummy husband and teacher to get stds. Then suffer excruciating pain for being such arseholes

Been there done that! The only difference I was20 years older than these people. I left the hotel room after having sex with my sweetheart and as soon as I got home my wife wanted to fuck. I was worry about getting it up but the link of leaving one pussy and within 1/2 an hour being in another was such a turn one I was like rock hard as soon as her panties hit the floor.