All Comments on 'A Good Girl'

Sweet and sensual.

Tess (uk)

Had me until "her eyes rolling back in her head." Dumb, dumb, dumb. 1*

It was pretty good. Although, it lacked feeling. Like he could dump her without feeling a thing for her. Too bad. They could have had it all.

Maybe it would be nice if they had names. Instead of the man or the women. And calling her Good Girl, it sounds as if she is dog . Yet. I do like parts of it. I think you ended it too soon. I think the women is still waiting for you to return . The look in her eyes. Perhaps. Says it all. Come Back to me. I am still waiting for you. Lady Jayne