All Comments on 'A Good Job'

Great start, would love to see more!

is a natural thing for this story

This goes on every night in every country in the world. I love it.

Keep the story going!

Great story waiting for another

I was hoping for a part two. Good story

needs to b longer and the son should do her

You certainly should continue the story. The unfolding story is pregnant with potential.

Would love to see a sequel. Plus her own perspective during, because I would really love to hear her enjoying it.

Very well written, I'd love to see it continued. Maybe the wife "accidentally" takes a tumble down a flight of stairs? Maybe the son would like a use as well? A lot of possibilities here.