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Click here"What are you ...oh my God that feels nice." She says and she begins to move against my finger.
"Come for me, again," I whisper into her ear.
She becomes more frantic as I stroke her faster and faster. She arches her back again and begins to come again. Her vagina contracts around my cock which is still hard inside her.
"Oooh, William, fucking Christ, Oooh, yes," She yells. I look around to make sure no one has discovered our hiding place.
She calms down slowly, her breathing becoming slower and steady. She opens her eyes and blinks. There is a huge smile on her face. "That was amazing; I've never ...so many times before, and you're still hard," she says looking at me and I smile as well.
She squeezes her legs around me keeping me deep inside her. She touches the end of my nose with her finger then pulls me down to give me a quick kiss.
She puts her mouth to my ear and whispers slowly emphasizing each word. "Well ...I think you're a good man."
* * *
"You can let me off here mister," She says. I pull over and she gets out of the car. "Thanks a lot," Are her last words to me as she dashes across the road. I sigh as I watch her pretty legs emerging from under her dress as she heads into a house. I see that the grass out front needs cutting.
© William Goodman 2021
- COMMENTS
wgoodmanalmost 3 years agoAuthorThanks to all for your comments. I am happy to see so much interest in my first try at this. A Good Man started out as a straight sex fantasy. You know, older man picks up young woman. As I wrote story evolved it became more realistic. I gave William and Ann personal histories and faults, and all does not go smoothly. It is a dance of two people trying to meet their own needs. Is William a good man or not, what do you think?
To those who want to know more about Ann, I agree. A Good Man: William’s Story is written from the man’s point of view. After I finished it I began asking, what about the woman’s experience of the encounter? My second submission A Good Man: Ann’s Story is written from Ann’s point of view. It should be available on Literotica in a couple of days. I am a man so I hope I got it right. Tell me what you think.
To proofreader Anonymous Thanks for the corrections. Spelling poorly has been the bane of my life. I will make the changes here as soon as I can. You can also read my stories on my blog.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoLiked it very much; would have given it a 4.5 if such a rating were available. The backstory of both characters was well done, informative re their states of mind but not overlong. Especially liked that the female was not demoted to "slut" for simply expressing the sexuality inherent in a passionate woman. More, please. (A sequel for her time at university, perhaps focusing on her development?)
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoGood premise.
Nut, boy do you need an editor/proofreader. You wrote: "gas peddle"; PEDDLE means to SELL. You meant PEDAL. Multiple other such errors including PASSED when you meant PAST.
She got into the car and imediately removed her panties. Huh? No explanation. No reason/rationale. No reaction from him.
Had real potential. Didn't deliver.
Three stars.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoBetter than a cuck or IR story as your first submission. BUT, it moved way too fast, no character build up, unbelievable scenarios, had a hard time making the characters real in my mind. You said he's older, how much older? Little things like that make the difference between a good story and mediocre. I gave you a 3 for stepping outside the box on your first story. Take a bit more time to flesh out the next submission, it's the little things that make a difference. Good luck.
