All Comments on 'A Gooner's Tale'

A Nice drabble. Well written. Good first effort. Please continue to write. You have shown the talent for a more detailed and fully developed story here. So I encourage you to explorer this theme more deeply and keep going.

I liked it and gave 5* as affirmation you are on to somr thing.

This piece is a waste of time! I truly regret that nobody is going to see this until to late to avoid even clicking on the link.

Changoparati wrote a suck ass tale!

A piece of shit that's the size of a whale!

This thing isn't worth it! It's a smelly-ass turd!

Chango had a bimbo mindset before writing a word!

Chew on that, no talent!

If a story could blow dead bears, this one would!

by that I mean it is a small segment in a series of events that led here, and should follow, but what were, or are they? There is a talent for words and situations, not too much emotion here, but it is what it is. I would like to read where this come from or how it ended.

You sensationalize smoking meth and getting fucked by a train of likely HIV-positive drug addicts. You're a real winner....

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