All Comments on 'A Halloween to Remember'

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE ABOUT CHERYL AND MARK.

Most exciting read in a long time...licking forward to more of this delicious couple.

cant wait for more omg loved it

that had to be one of the hotest stories i have read in a long time and i sure hope there will be more from you soon

That was beautiful. You got the story going and when the gender reveal arrived it took me a sec,. to pick up on what happened, so I suppose that might have been clearer, (icky little comment)

but I just loved the entire story, actions and personalities. Its not me, but there were no problems in my head. Hopefully you carry on.

Good luck

As I started to read this story, I was wondering if it would become a role reversal where she would get him to dress up as a woman and end up the highlight of the party. But NO, you took this story to a new height. I can see that it will be a beautiful love story as well as a sexy one. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I love your imagination and creative story development. Characters were sensible and real, erotic and not crude for this all caring theme. I support the future of this author. Hope you have a 2-Notify list to keep us advised when the next 'creation' evolves. Thanks for sharing.

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Now I'm jealous. What a fantastic story. You go girl. Keep on writing great stories.

Stop now before any more drivel comes forth.

You are an amazing writer. I absolutely loved the way Cheryl’s dick was brought into the story. I had no clue till Melanie started going done on her. The threesome was a fantastic event. Thanks for your story. I was fortunate enough to have experienced anal one time (about fifty years ago) and to this day remember it well.