All Comments on 'A Halloween Treat'

Omfg I’m so ready for part 2!!!!

I truly loved this story! ♡♡♡

It felt so natural, so real and very easily relatable. Excellent job. I'm looking forward to reading more and hopefully reading more about Samantha.

While using Halloween as the story catalyst could be considered a bit overdone (which in itself isn't a bad thing), I found this to be a sweet story of experimentation at Halloween and coming of age. This could easily be the first part of a longer story with many twists and turns as the protagonist grows and discovers more of his/herself.

Gonna need a part 2 at your earliest convenience

I really enjoyed this story. I felt like you got some of the nuance of the situation Sam was in, and his reactions along the way. Having a good deal of dialogue worked well in this story. Thanks so much!

A great first story, well done. Roll on parts 2, 3, and 4!

This was so gorgeous and sweet. If only all the boys were like Mike! I’d love to see more of these character, especially a developing friendship between Sam and Katie (sexy or otherwise).

Super adorable and tastefully lewd. I loved it! Please keep writing... doesn't have to be a follow-up to this one(though a part 2 would be amazing), but do keep writing stories

Absolutely loved it. I hope there is a part 2

Absolutely wonderful story! I'm now a follower. Can't wait to see more.

Great story. Both hot and romantic. Looking forward to next part….please write a next part !❤️

Very well written. Cant wait for part 2.

This may be the most adorable story I've ever read in this site. Moar please !!!

Sam is a lucky girl, I hope you continue with the story. I really want to know what happens next. Luv Chloe.

Very well written. I'm hoping there is a Part 2 :)

guess im the only one thinking gtfo americans

What a beautifully written story, please continue it we need to know what happens next

This was so cute! I really hope you do a sequel but either way you made a new fan in me!

Amazing story! Hope theres a part 2!

Loved the first submission. Would love to see a part 2 to see where Sam's transition goes.

That is a really beautiful story with all the right elements. Discovery, acceptance, romance, love and passion. Worth a 6!

Well written. Good subject matter. Excellent first effort!

No antagonism or unwilling participants. Nobody was treated poorly. No spouse with an ulterior motive or evil intentions.

Just a sweet tale about people letting down their walls and sharing a good experience.

If there are further episodes, I hope they are written in the same way.

Fantastic job on a lovely story . Neeo a part two.

Beautiful story! touched my heart! Please please carry on!

Nice warm story..quite believable

It was a great story, I’m so jealous of Sam. When can we expect Part 2!?

This is a great story. Please write a follow up so we can see how the relationship with Sam develops and what does Alex make of the changes in Sam. Then there are Sam's parents and does he have any siblings. This has me wondering about so many things and I really need you to tell us what happens.

needs more to follow on

I loved it. A beautiful romance type of story, that was very well written. The reader could almost become Sam, and the visualizations could be seen by the reader closing their eyes. He might not have wanted it to happen at first, but played along with it during the night, and just let nature take it's course. He also made a new friend in Mike. This does deserve a 2nd part, but the author hasn't posted in over a year,bummer. This story had it all; discovery, acceptance, romance, love and passion. I'll be saving this one into my personal favorites.

I loved it. It's a beautiful story of two people who meet and fall in love. What more could you want besides a part two. ;-)