by mynameisben
You write very well! And VERY descriptively! Are you planning Chapter 2 for Ben and Kim? I hope so!
This is a well-written little romance; unfortunately, it is just that- too little. The story is a good one, and deserves to be longer. It also deserves to be placed in the Romance genre, because that is exactly what it is, a well-crafted but all too brief love story.