All Comments on 'A Happy Marriage Pt. 02'

It'll be interesting to read about the favour being returned.

Wish it was a bit longer

Well, the English is not bad, if you use a grammar checker, a thesaurus and a dictionary while writing, the output will be a lot tighter and better.

That said, an erotic story needs a plot and the sex has to blend seamlessly into that plot. You don’t just write a rather insipid sex scene and hope some plot fits into it.

You should study the writer’s resources on Literotica, it will certainly help you write good stories.