by Jahmes
So now that you've got hooked, you think that you can just leave hanging. Well, I guess you can, because you just did. This story is getting allot more interesting now. Can't wait to see where this is leading. Five stars again and looking for chapter #5. Thanks. MLF
Too short. How is Ryan not addressing this situation upfront? Phil lies to Scott, Phil obviously lied to Ryan about ending it with Scott. Now Phil shows up to Ryan’s birthday to just rub it in that he’s still lying. On top of that he acts like an idiot when Ryan asks him questions in the kitchen. Then to top it off, the most idiotic middle school scenario of playing Spin the Bottle. I don’t know adult friends who play this game amongst each other, watching boyfriends make out and rub boners with their friends. And Ryan in no realistic scenario would sit quietly with Phil there. It seems obvious that it will lead to Ryan making out with Phil which would then throw this entire story into the crapper. I hoped for more, I’m not seeing it.
I'm trying to get to it but work has really been in the way and I type on a phone but if anyone cares I'm sending the new one out today and two more maybe right after (if I can finish editing them) or tomorrow