All Comments on 'A Hard Ride on the Train'

Sweet. ;0)

Sorry.....this one was soooooo bad. Were you in some major hurry to finish the (bad) story or something?

Take your time on the next one........and try a little harder to make it believeable; this one was so fake.

This was a good story, but it just needs more details of the sexual nature.

Sorry, didn't like it. It should be in a different category -- it isn't a lesbian story with the male in it, just a sex story.

Utter RUBBISH!!!.Wrong category.I could write better than this and my stories stink.

Could do better.