by sexharvester
Utter RUBBISH!!!.Wrong category.I could write better than this and my stories stink.
Could do better.
Sorry, didn't like it. It should be in a different category -- it isn't a lesbian story with the male in it, just a sex story.
This was a good story, but it just needs more details of the sexual nature.
Sorry.....this one was soooooo bad. Were you in some major hurry to finish the (bad) story or something?
Take your time on the next one........and try a little harder to make it believeable; this one was so fake.