by m_storyman_x
What a fantasy. Can teenage boy have that many orgasms in one night, over several days? Sounds like locker room/barracks boasting...(for competitive males or females?) Dracula never had it so good.
( a whole sorority?)
This is a most original plot, at least from what I have read here...and I have read a lot in the last 3 1/2 years!! I am anticipating the next chapter will be just as exciting as this one...TALLY HO!!
Wonderful! You are definitely a talented, twisted, dirty person. Very debaucherous minded (I just made that word up, on the fly. At least I think I made it up). This was a fun and original concept. And very well written.
I worked at a haunted house many years ago and while we lived in a small town we still had a local college nearby that we had loads of fun with. Really enjoyed this story!!
If I was you I would have finishined dracula off with Debbie. Give them a relationship. I also would have made him younger. But maybe an older student. Or teachers aide...he seems to stuffy as he ends up...
and well written. With one exception, that being the manner in which Deb presented herself to him that first time. Unfortunately it didn't ring true. That said, the remainder of the story did. Of course the long line of girls sent into the tunnel by Deb strained one's imagination, but since this is erotic material was acceptable. I especially enjoyed the way in which our hero listens to his friend describe 'his' nightly adventures while remaining quiet about his own.
Finally, I think this the best Halloween story I've ever read. And from one writer to another, a truly great read.
Great story. I could see this happening in real life too. All your stories get me going!