All Comments on 'A Hero in Yellow Ch. 02'

This second part was just long enough to keep my interest up without being too long. I can't wait for the second part since my mind is imagining just what happens next and wonder from where that takes you.

Keep it up great story line so far.

Hi Taylor,

I am enjoying your story, just a couple of respectful suggestions. Please cut the use of all the exclamation marks, it sounds like a teenage girl's diary. One more thing, it's 'lose' not 'loose'.

I am really looking forward to more of these gorgeous guys and their romance.

ok i think its a wonderful story dont listen to the guy at the top the exclamation marks are perfectly situated to put emphasis on the more important aspects of the story hence the use of an exclamation mark honestly some poeple

They are both too sweet!

:3

Sound like they will become such a cuteeeee couple

makes me wanna go out there and find that special person

thank you and keep the story coming.

chapter 3 wait for me

god pass me my hanky.? lol loving it.?

GOOD GAY LOVE STORY