All Comments on 'A Hero's Task Pt. 01'

I can see the early feedback voting isn't great - hopefully it's because this is essentially all build up, which probably isn't what people are looking for in an erotica site!

I really hope you persevere with part 2 and onward when it is published (it's pending approval) but please do comment and tell me if there is something in my voice, story or writing style that you think could be improved or just frankly don't like

I thought your story was very good, although i'm a bit biased lol

can't wait for ch. 2

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It was well written and quite enjoyable. I'll be starting part 2 shortly, thank you for sharing them with us!