All Comments on 'A Holiday Haunting Ch. 01'

Great story. I hope it is continued.

I don't know much about America in the 1800s, but I don't feel I had to, your story felt believable, like you had done your research.

I also commend you on your writing, I didn't notice any of the common mistakes you often see in first time authors on this site.

The last piece of constructive criticism I have, is that I think I would have liked to know a little more about the main character.

Tl;dr: really liked the story and I hope you write a part 2.

Great story - loved the characters and getting to understand them. Really interested to see what happened to Erin, what will come next.

I hope you write another piece to this story. Well written and enjoyable

While there's a conclusion of sorts so much is left open and a sequel is called for.

Loved the conept. Well written and very enjoyable. A few little mistakes, typos, etc but not enough to make it frustrating to read although a final read through would be beneficial. Deserves its rating

I was wanting to hear more of this story!, perhaps Erin coming to life thru Lucy, or in some other manner. At the same time tho, it ended like it should with them finally getting the release that they both needed for Erin to move on. GREAT first story!!! Keep it up!!