All Comments on 'A Homecoming Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Check your national details!

“Ben's left hand, as if searching for a hold, had found its way across the backrest of her seat. As his fingers caressed her shoulder, Erika turned her head to breathily kiss the corner of Ben's mouth“

That would appear to place the driver, Christine, in the right hand seat.

OK for Australian driving but not for Austrian, where the driver would be seated on the left.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Enjoying this...

So far so good, looking forward to pt. 2.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 3 years ago

I'm loving every uncovering...!

I want to be in every scene!

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Wonderful Beginning

I was captured immediately and got so wrapped up in this story. Just can't wait to start the next part here shortly.

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I have had a now too long but varied, interesting and fortunate life. I have been a school-failure, migrant, cabinet-maker, mature-age student, teacher, academic, historian, etc., etc. As a husband I was found wanting, as a father, friend, companion less so. And I have always ...

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