All Comments on 'A Horny Stepdad & Teen Cheerleader'

really good really excellent really awesome . . . . hopefully we're gonna getting : Halle tells her best fucking friend

what happened between herself along stepfather . while they talking goods spilling goods Halle along

Jessie become getting sexual . matter fact they really get down . matter fact they really get nasty . matter fact

they really become dirty ( MAKE SURE PERFECTION DETAILS ABOUT EVERYTHING NONE EXCEPTIONS )

Thank you for the praise & feedback, CrankThzJackInDaBox! I appreciate it.

I will consider adding onto this story in the near future.

we also better get part three of this . . . . . . somewhere in the middle of Halle of Jessie getting down

getting nasty : Jessie informs Halle that she so turned on from listening details about Halle along her stepfather

. that Jessie wants fuck needs fuck must fuck Halle's stepfather . so whether they both do set it up whether only

Jessie sets it up . Jessie gonna totally seduce really fuck crazy hardcore Halle's stepfather . it'll also

fully happen in the same story . MAKE SURE PERFECTION DETAILS . ( if Jessie hasn't been told about

Halle along Jessie's father than keep it secret ) { if Halle wasn't part of setup her stepfather along Jessie

than keep it secret } [ what's gonna happen when Halle catches her stepfather banging the

absolute hell outta Jessie + what's gonna happen when closer part this installment does become

Halle telling her stepfather that he can only have her or have her mother he cannot have both &

MOST IMPORTANTLY what's gonna happen when some point this installment the stepfather he tells

Halle that her mother was lesbian along bisexual truly long time ago ]

Thank you for the additional feedback & suggestions, CrankThzJackInDaBox!

Always appreciated! You have certainly given me plenty to think about regarding future erotic stories.

I'm enjoying it and can't yet criticise the story, but remember this IS a story. You should be using the word "and" instead of the symbol. "Because" should be used instead of "bc". Assume your readers don't text or use character-limiting social media.

Ok, thank you for the feedback, and I will keep that in mind when writing future stories.

So so good! More stories with Halle and her stepdad please!

Thank you for the praise, AruziaMelnik! I appreciate it! Hopefully I can write more in the near future!

abreviations don't work in a story, although one can understand what your saying,

Something I’ll keep in mind for next story if I ever have enough free time for more writing. Thanks.

Fantastic story. Luck guy. If it was me, I would be thrusting her from behind & shooting my load deep in her cervix walls.

Thank you for the feeedback. I appreciate it. It’s nice to go back and reflect on my past writings while reading the praise.