All Comments on 'A Hot Afternoon in the Barn'

TR you hit this one out of the park!

Excellent piece.

Good ptrmise.

Starts well. Then gets too involved.

Four stars.

Cousins...lots of memories. 5*

Loved it! Was hoping mom and dad would catch them and then join in! Five stars and a favorite point!

Top notch! Can't wait to have him fill his sister full, cum in her holes and cum shower his cousins.

Lots of typos and grammar mistakes-- they are a distraction to an otherwise fun read.

Yeah, in need of a lt more editing than usual in your stories. Also, don't give a supposedly innocent girl a name taken from a 'Top 5 Stripper Names' list next time. That, or put her in clear acrylic heels, to make it fit.

WOW. A dream come true. Loved it

Sexy Gary could have a bit of sexy chest hair to please his sister and cousin! He seems a very well-built sexy guy!

Premise was promising but went far to fast. Could have waited until chapter 4 for these actions

Good story. Slow played very well. Amazing how he kept from cumming so long.

Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful, my 2 live in fuck buddies and I fucked and sucked each other into sexual oblivion while reading this. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way. Cunt crazed fucker, UK. More and more like this and soon please.

Them farm girls is hot AF.

very nice

Incredibly hot. Good quick story. Sex scene was well described and the plot was realistic. 5/5

Excellent story. I noticed you don't do many multi part stories. I hope this is one that has a part 2......or 3 :-)

Oh.....5 stars by the way.

A really good story, thanks for sharing it

Another hot one from the master! Sure would like a chapter 2 or 5 for this one.

Cheers

SAGE

OMG loved it, funny and very hot!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story - Hopefully there is more to read soon

Well done. Thoroughly enjoyed and hope to see more of this group.

Please write another chapter, and give sexy Gary a sexy hairy chest!

Damn good!!! You should do more!

One of the most cute and enjoyable stories I had read. The three girls and Gary deserve another chapter.

Fun Sexy Story! Next Chapter...Karen should sit on his face and feed him his own cum as Jenny gets her turn to ride his massive Cock!