All Comments on 'A Hot Summer's Night Ch. 05'

by DarkBreezly

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Zadock77Zadock77over 4 years ago

I think it should go back to those three or just bring in Julia and not another guy but other then that I’ve enjoyed all of them just chapters 1 2 3 4 more then the prequel and this one .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Thanks for sharing! I much enjoyed this story and like where it's headed.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

Awesome fucking story!! Hopefully this chapter will get republished as an Illustrated version as well. That would be fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Illustrated version

Love to see illustrated version. Your illustrations are outstanding.

chiefhalchiefhalabout 1 year ago

Who the hell talks without contractions while they're having sex?!?

If Julie is gone, how is she snoring and waking up at the same time?!?

You desperately need someone to proof your writing!

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