by DarkBreezly
I think it should go back to those three or just bring in Julia and not another guy but other then that I’ve enjoyed all of them just chapters 1 2 3 4 more then the prequel and this one .
Awesome fucking story!! Hopefully this chapter will get republished as an Illustrated version as well. That would be fucking hot!
Love to see illustrated version. Your illustrations are outstanding.
Who the hell talks without contractions while they're having sex?!?
If Julie is gone, how is she snoring and waking up at the same time?!?
You desperately need someone to proof your writing!