All Comments on 'A Hotel Error Pt. 03'

ERIC & SANDRA ARE BACK AT IT AGAIN!

As Eric & Sandra enter the world of Swingers, /porn/Only fans to secret of secrets of their forbidden taboo liaisons previously in part 2 of hotel error. Besides Erica &Geroge are giving each other cold shoulder, after leaving the house bills in a lurch of overdue bills,

Erstwhile, Eric plants a seed of potential gangbang with his hot mom by friending (fuck a fan) in her (Alexia Studios) under mom's porn alias (Alexia) with hot online 3 some between them. Including encountering another likeminded [person of Grace at the restaurant.

We'll see how it goes next time for Eric & Sandra, family in Hotel Error adventure's part 4

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Catch ya later.

Cheers!

Yes I know I need an editor, but patience and lack of free time got to me. 40 hours spread over 3 months just doesn't work unfortunately when trying to produce a story on the side:(

In away this was just pushed through to give some ending for the individuals who were following along. Now I see the much larger and greater world I had been setting up will be a 100 probably even 200 hours of work.

To any fans who see where this might be going I give them permission to carry on with the "Red Manual" if they need a world to build on. Its something like Steven Kings Dark Tower and how it combines the multiple horror stories into one universe.

nope you went off the rails with this, part 1 was good,part 2 so so, this part was absolutely stupid,never in a million years is this anyway minutely plausible

Just... stupid.

Good story, but need more.

I hope there's a part 4. As for editing and grammar, I found that Grammarly helps quite a bit. Keep em cumming.

Thank you for a fantastic read so far, one of the best I've read in quite a while! There are so many clever turns the tale can (and hopefully will!) take and I'm looking forward to the paths you choose to follow in this story.

Not good after first two. Lost it sensuality and touch and seem out of character. More business less love (

Not good

Sorry, this chapter killed the original theme. Totally out of character compared to the first two chapters. If you can have them come back to thier true selves in any following chapters you may be able salvage the story. Otherwise, just another far fetched stroke story.

Seemed a descent read, I hope the business aspects don't get to far out of wack and ruin the story. But overall,so far so good...5 🌟

Agree with other comments. Didn't totally care for this chapter, and a 3some is not a gangbang.

This chapter was definitely lacking compared with the others. As others are saying, it seemed rather impersonal and all the business aspects were in the way of the story. I was hoping for Beth to be more involved and I hope she will in future chapters. I hope the proof reading gets better, the punctuation (or lack thereof) was a problem.