All Comments on 'A House Full of Women Ch. 02'

It's still a very sweet story, but now I can detect the edge as well. Whew!

---"No!" Vanessa shouted at the top of her voice. "She's staying here, and that's final!"

Loved it! A real soap opera of a story, a sort of three-way emotional tennis match, a lot of fun. How full of women will the house get, one wonders? Thanks.

Love ❤ these stories by Kathryn. They're kind of romantic, kind of erotic. This one seems to have a lot of potential. The last one, where the narrator's boyfriend finished up fucking her sister and mother was cool too. Keep them cumming, K!

Fascinating story lines. Love the two chapters available. Both 5 stars

Kathryn, This second chapter of the Jack & Vanessa story is a bit less believable. While the Joanna's traumatic event happens too often and separated couples often have temporary reunions, Vanessa's reaction is strange, though to an unattached reader, it may make sense. I can't wait to see how you bring it all together into a realistic dream! Bob

Kathryn where are these women and how do I meet them?? Another great story. Look forward to future chapters.

I like the story, But it needs another chapter or two. AAAA++++

Superb. Good story and hot sex combined.

Great Story. Keep going.

Tho unwritten presumably/ hopefully mature Joanna would have a full adult woman's muffin...?

and Jack a HELL of a stud/bull if he blows four loads into her willing snapper at 45...don't recall even doing that at 18...

and VERY compassionate Vanessa...!

loving this series...looking forward to next chapter

Well written and interesting. Vanessa is a surprise. I want to read more. 5.

nice story! It's so rare to find a good story here that acknowledges polyamory in a positive manner. Thank you

Good story, however... Men, in general, tend to cut women out that hurt them. It's only 2 chapters and I can see why they split. She is more worried about what she is versus who she is. I am not sure, are you trying to point out/highlight this major flaw in todays world?

Very Good

neat!

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Okay, I wasn't expecting that twist! But I love it!! If you read my stories, you're going to find that polyamory and bisexual females figure heavily in my themes. I also have a kink for first cousin love affairs and brother/sister incest, but that doesn't figure in on all of my stuff. Some people may feel that first cousin love is incest, but the fact is that in at least a third of the States, first cousin marriage is still legal even though two of the states require genetic counseling before the marriage. By that measure, I don't consider it to be incest, but if I write a cousin story, I'll still place it in the incest/taboo category. But I digress...

I'm loving Vanessa more and more with each chapter of this story that I read. You have characterized her as someone extremely special that I could fall deeply in love with if she were real. The more that I read this, the more that you make me remember my bisexual ex-wife in the good times before her mind snapped and she became a sociopath.

And speaking about my ex, you specifically hit on something that she was guilty of when you mentioned women looking at men's derrieres. My ex loved seeing my butt naked and often praised me for having one that fit her tastes. I gave you a 5/5 for this one and I'm looking forward towards the next part. But one thing troubles me and I truly hope that you don't turn down that path. If you emasculate Jack and turn him into the women's sub, then we're done. That's going to buy you a score of one so fast that your head will spin. This chapter contains subtle hints that lean in that direction, so I'm cautious and wary. 5/5

Ive only just read chapter 2 and im ready to throw up. What an utterly spineless excuse for a man,whats the matter Kathryn dont you like men

I liked the first chapter with Jack portrayed as a gentleman. In this chapter both of the original characters seem like completely different people. Vanessa is dominant and Jack is what; a simp, spineless? The title led me to expect polyamory but the plot is so unreasonable that I won’t continue.