All Comments on 'A Husband's Temptation Boils Over'

Too much moaning and goaning

No idea why she should be in the marriage bed

No story behind the sex. Why tempted? Who are these people? Wife where?

Was there a story here? It made no sense at all and just WHAT was the husbands temptation supposed to be? Hope your next submission is better because this one stunk.

Sometimes moaning and groaning is enough. Some stories have so much dialogue and not enough sex. I thought this was hot!

Hot concept but it definitely needs more fleshing out. The situation would be much more effective if we had more detail on their affair.