All Comments on 'A Husbands Triumph'

One star for absolute trash

I love a good revenge story and after hearing what that bitch did to her husband and the reason she did it and on top of that the lack of any remorse I cheered when they took her away.

I enjoyed it, needs a prequel though!

The rating system is not showing but your story is 5 stars! A wonderful revenge story and I do so love karma! Don't pay any attention to one star, she doesn't know what she's talking about.

The groceries! Does no one care about the groceries? Also, have a better reason for the wife's actions.

Finally a story with real world consequences! There’s this little thing called consent, you know it’s what separates legal from illegal!

Okish for a story treatment. Look forward to the actual full story should you choose to write it.

This story could have been longer with so much more detail.

Wow! Love this story idea! Great job!

It would have interesting from the start, but the writer started at the end. How did all this happen? Why did it happen? What enterprise was his wife involved with. This could have been a good, multi part story.

I liked your story, it is very fine! Thanks

5 stars short and to the point good dialogue

Would have given it 4 stars. An absolutely horrifying story but a well written one, decent if long delayed revenge. Just utterly horrifying, how someone could do that to a person they claimed to love, death would have been a merciful alternative.

Wow, that was one hell of a story, short and right to the point!

What was that? One star

I understand why you put it in this category, but I almost missed it because of that. I think this could easily be more of an LW BTB story, especially if you included the whole story instead of just the ending, as it's not so much transgender as mutilation and abuse.

Uhhh, really weird story to put here. This should definitely be in noncon or not erotic. I mean we should really just make a new section called revenge, but this is a weird is story to put here.

SICKENING

It could have been better, but I'll give it a 5 for BTB. Long live BTB stories and death to cuck stories. And death to those who don't like BTB

Not bad but the M/C is a bit too calm...

That's was a really well done for being so short

5 stars

Very good. A 5. A bit short. She's looking at time behind bars - the only question is how long.

5 stars. Very well done. Thank you

Feels unfinished.

For those who are wondering, what we read was a vignette, What's a vignette, you might ask?

"a brief evocative description, account, or episode."

So, no, a story does not require a beginning, a middle or an end.

First thoughts, what the actual fuck...

And then... I kinda liked it.

'At first blush' I thought....massively fucked up. So I popped down to comments.

TrackI called it. Interestingly done. Provocative. You have to think some.

As the title says: "A Husband's Triumph."

Another stupid story with not a ending, Who would have thought of that Really? If you do not smoke dope maybe you should try it some time it may help you in your Writing skills If you do smoke dope, then that maybe your problem as well.

College facility### really????

If that's what victory looks like, I'd hate to taste defeat.

Your idea is great I really like the story but you could have done so much more with it and con into so much more detail and filled it with more drama

Like told us about there time growing up together then there marriage and how she became there book keeper and whore and how she still loved him but still through him under bus and made him her bitch maid then how she escaped and got help and his/her fight back

With luck the bitch will die in prison.

More of a horror story than loving wives.

5 stars. Good to read a come back story. Prologue?

An interesting look into the evil side of people. You didn't quite expand on the depth and the other people involved as much as you should have, if that's where a great part of the blame lies. By being too slow and dramatic in telling it, you lose part of the story.

But the part that you and the commentators are really missing is the motivation issue. You seem to be treating it as a mental thing with the bent 'wife' and her friends. It's not a mental thing, the mental part is just the narcissism and other symptoms. The disease is in the heart, ugly and evil and selfish, and no amount of counseling can fix that.