by Emma1994UK
Good concept, nice writing, especially the scene between Aphrodite and the nymphs. But could use some more scenes during the two weeks they're together. Two tiny quibbles:
All gods, all men are subject to my domains.|Suggest All gods, all men are subject to my decrees.--Decrees are orders, domains are territories.
virgin that I am an inexperienced in making love,|Should be: virgin that I am and inexperienced in making love,
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Sex in the countryside amid Nature's fecundity - how wonderfully earthy. Another well written story, another original angle on erotica, another imaginative and refreshing take on nobs, knockers and naughtiness. I think your stories really stand out from the common herd (he said grasping your bovine idiom) and I do enjoy the mythology and classical allusions. Super!