All Comments on 'A Hyper Hookup'

by BeybladeMoses

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Best I've read in a good while

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Awesome. Has a lot of potential. While it went right into the action, I'd warn the writer about rushing the plot on each chapter. Maybe another page or half-a-page would make it the right length. Otherwise a 5/5 and looking forward for more action between those two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome

Thank you very much for this awesome story. It hit a lot of my kinks, and I'm sure I will read it again and again. Can't wait for more parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome

Thanks for the story hope to see more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A suggestion for what to put in the next chapter

Hi there! I was wondering if you would be willing to include one of two things in the chapter of your story. The first ting i would love to see if Tyler would try to put his member inside of Suki's, and if that should be the case, maybe her cum flows into him instead of just spraying out. If that is not to your liking, maybe he could instead try fisting suki's member? From what I've read it certainly seems possible. Beyond that I think that overall it was a fantastic story and I can't wait for your next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
best hyper story in a while

i hope you are working on chapter two. or another similar story id hate for this to be the only one

BeybladeMosesBeybladeMosesalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Hey there Everyone I'm glad your enjoying the story. I will be coming out with a chapter 2, so rest assured :D.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow. Just wow.

That was one hell of a read. Leaves me wondering what would happen if Suki skips out on taking her suppressants....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent. More??

Great story. I hope there will be more chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A real futa

The story is very good, although I would like to see how Suki puts the hyper in hyper futa and shows Tyler what it means to be one by doing absurd things like Cumming for 24h non stop , or stretching her dick to the bathtub, locking it there and going around her day with her cock permanently glued to the tub, always spewing cum and stretching when needing to go further or sagging when returning, so by the end of the day, her cock is like a 30 feet long anaconda that needs to go down with a massive cum dump and medication, that ends up clogging the sewers of the building, or maybe go to a field trip to a once dried lake and have see with her until her balls fill the pond with newly fresh cum, only to see couple days later how a new ecosystem has arisen from her Highly nutritious seed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

Please continue. Also we need more lines like "make me bigger!" And "I'll grow for you!" More details from her about wanting her cock to grow even bigger. Maybe letting her cock get to 10 or 12 feet and her stating she can still get bigger

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please...more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

We need more...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Come on with the delays already. More! We need more! With more of her growing for him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Heyyyyyyyyyy! Next part please!😆

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More....

Please.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's been so long and It's still one of my favorite stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know there probably isn't going to be a second part but I'd love it if they both started growing. Her and him competing for th ebiggest cock while loving each other and their relationship

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Been checking regularly for the next part...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Waiting patiently for the next part....(sigh)

Bi_unsureiousBi_unsureiousalmost 2 years ago

Suuuuper hot story 🤤 I love the excessive cum elements and hope to see it develop further! I'd love to see Suki in a later story get into some "autofutallatio" scenes, titfucking herself in bed (or in the tub) and struggling to drink as much of her cum as possible.

Can't wait to see which direction you take in the future! I'll be looking out for the next chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Come on with the next part already...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Best story I read in a long time. Waiting for the next part. And please please please let Suki grow bigger

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Guess the next part ain't never comming..coming...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Been waiting forever. This storyline must be dead...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cum on with the next part already...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dang it! Where the heck is the next part? Come on already....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story. Please do another part. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You still out there? Will we ever get the next part to this awesome story?

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