by JamesMiehoff
Thanks for the comments. As this is a significant departure in writing for me I am still getting my style together. I will be increasing the length over the next few parts and I will be delving into more of the backstory of Muddle and his apprenticeship.
I am still sorting out the balance of moving the current story forward and filling in the backstory of Muddle and the world he lives in.
Please bear with me as I try to fine tune juggling a much large world and it's history and the effects on an orphan many times over as he makes his way through it.
James
But you really need to increase the length of your chapters. I personally find anything under 3 pages to be slightly irritating since it doesn't give you the immersion necessary to really enjoy it.