All Comments on 'A King's Legacy Ch. 31'

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geemeedeegeemeedee10 months ago

Whoa! What a great reveal! I always figured there were humans around, but I was definitely thinking Flose (how do you pronounce it? Floss? Flows? Flow-ez?) was a beast.

PupBayouPupBayou10 months agoAuthor

Sorry, misworded, and then posted on wrong damn chapter lol.

Pronounce like "Flows." I never dropped his species name, and a lot of people didnt catch it, but many did. It was hard trying to write about him his first appearance without using many descriptors lol.

RagiiRagii4 months ago

You made me laugh with the part about Byron and his daughter and the coyote.

This passage is so well brought and we get more and more attached to the universe and the characters you've built with these so human moments where everyone can attach echo of memories from their own life.

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