All Comments on 'A King's Touch Ch. 04'

good writing, but I did not award the chapter the full 100 points because it only gets worse and worse - emotionally that is. I know they got back together towards the end of healer's touch but it still seems such a long time till that comes to pass. and there was no mention of a child then. well, guess I have to wait and see...

Wow! Horrible things just keep happening to poor sara! Phillp is going to realize what a jerk he's being! Which makes me question! Is this the phillp that helped deliver gracie's triplet's in the desert? Oh boy! Can't wait for more and soon! Thanks!! u

how oculd you let her become the preistess and let brent take her virginity that was sow wrong i mean philip could have stopped this. well i hope sara dosent fogive him know. i just feel that its a romantic story anymore about tw people in love

I had to go back and read the end of healers touch. How can you keep the two of them apart for so long. I so can not wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!!! I am loving this story even though it hurts to know that they wont be together for so long.

poor little baby. i feel so bad for him, his dad is being an ass, and his mom is all alone to raise him. (sniff sniff, tear) I think we need to give Sara a hug Dragon. lol.

This chapter was awesome! Sad and frustrating, but great! These characters are really something special! I can't wait to see how everything unfolds!

Love this story line. Eager for the next chapter!

I don't enjoy stories containing rape. Especially when there is no warning. It completely ruined the story for me. I still admire your writing but I will have to give the rest of the story a miss. Perhaps the next one will be more to my liking. Good luck with it.

As far as most men would be concerned belongs to Brent the whole spirit bonding thing may work for women but men have a different attitude toward such matters ( in most cases).

I really like the story as you have the ability to make characters come to life and I can definitely sympathize with Philip, I don't think he is being an ass for not recognizing the baby as his, he is feeling hurt and betrayed because unlike the readers of the story he doesn't know everything else going on. This story is very powerful maybe the most powerful story you've written to date and I eagerly await the next chapter.

I totally agree that Phillip can't see the entire truth of what has happened to Sara/Zarita. The complusion still is

there and I can only hope future chapters will reveal Sara's

reasons for staying as a Priestess of Eluran. I do wish that something horrible happens to both Brent and Sean..let

alone that slimeball that is now King of Sandoval. Dragon-tatoo can be harsh when a character shows real evil!!!

I look forward to more chapters...aren't we all glad that NOV. has 30 days!

this chapter really dissapointed me. i think your a great writer but for all this to happen to her is painful to think about. yes we all want happily ever afters and no pain, and i understand not every story can be like that, but this chapter ruined the story for me. I really like your style but unfortunately i dont think i can read the next chapters. I cant imagine her having to go through any of this after the events in the last chapters. It seems alittle far fetched even for sci-fi. I really did enjoy it up until now, and im sure the rest is a great story with an even better ending but...

I can't finish this. I'm so sorry. It caught my attention at first. But i just. I can't. It's too painful

Lol that sounded so out of place.