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by SomaSlave

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proseinagardenproseinagardenabout 1 year ago

Wow! You did so much in just 750 words. I absolutely love the tension and the easy way your MCs move with each other. It’s sweet and passionate and to use your word, feral. We need more well crafted embraces like these.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Definitely wife material…wink wink

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 1 year ago

A very unique focus on just one aspect of an intimate encounter — and a very well done collection of words to draw us into that encounter. I've done these 750 word challenge contests and can appreciate this one you've crafted — they are not as easy to write as one might think. I'm rating the story based on experience and it's an easy 5 star story IMO.

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonabout 1 year ago

Beautiful story Soma, love the ambiguity of it, love the ending... A perfect quick story...

eljaybeljaybabout 1 year ago

A perfect description of a loving kiss, thank you

holliday1960holliday1960about 1 year ago

Very nice. Solid 5* and appreciation for your entry.

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My stories are a mix of my own explorations and the fantasies I would like to enjoy, if I ever work up the courage. Soma is my alter ego and a projection of my innermost desires and needs. The stories in the Soma's Journey series are based on my actual explorations. The other ...