by sweet_kitten
Totally agree with you there Anonymous .. this was written back in 2005 and has never undergone serious editing. One of the reasons I have never created a sequel is that I would like to rewrite it with more focus on the character dynamics and the psychological manipulation of the 'Master' ... I think in many ways I got lost in the smut aspect when really the key excitement for me lay in the hunt itself and the desire of the 'Master' and his wolves .. I liked the layering of the different characters in the story ... some cruel and nasty ... some maybe empathic and the Master's mystery and Dominance. I still think back to this story all these years after it was written :)
sweet_kitten:
Well written, though I feel you could have put some more time into differentiating the experiences in the finale. If they'd been described as well as the early parts of the narrative, I think I'd have given you the last star. Still, very hot set up, and a nice opening act. I hope to see more.
Iamcurious: Really? A hot story is not social commentary. Women need the same rights and freedoms as men. Including the right to declare themselves submissive without it becoming a statement about their entire gender. There are submissive men as well. We don't say that means that men don't need liberation, or that it means something about all men everywhere.
A sound insight into the fact that women don't handle freedom well.
Women need love, not "liberation". I'm sure we will see a happy kitten in coming stories.
I love how you have planned and written this story. The characters’ personalities are all very fitting of their role. I hope you could continue this piece please. I really can’t wait for more.
This story is great would love so much if there was more! Please continue!!!!
I just found this yesterday and sadly didn't get to read it all until just now. I loved this so much and would love to see more. I hope you find inspiration for the next part which I'm sure will be just as good this.
Hi guys
I just wanted to say that I'm so sorry I haven't written more. I am very proud of this piece and it's always been my plan to continue it, I have just never found the time or the right inspiration to work out what I want to happen next without the risk of spoiling what's already out there. I want you all to know that I LOVE reading your feedback, I am always popping back to read it. I really hope that I get a new flash of inspiration soon and come up with a sequel so I don't let you all down.
All the best
Sweet_kitten
you NEED to write more, i don't know why you haven't on however many years, but that was amazing!
That was a really good story, will you please write more so we can see what happens next.
Great story .. is there another chapter? Would love to know how she settles into a life of being a sex kitten.
This was a great story. One of the best I've read. Very hot! I enjoyed that your story was tweaked a bit out of the ordinary with the wolf pack characters. Please consider continuing it. I would love to read more about this adventure!
I hope you write on a professional level, i.e. regular books. You really put the reader in the thick of it! Keep up the good work.
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