All Comments on 'A Knight's Devotion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A very sweet story! More so on an emotional than sexual level maybe, but it is still pretty hot (I love that he pins her arms above her head, for instance!).

In the beginning there were some sentences that were a little difficult to understand (I think some commas were missing), but most of the story was rather well-written too! On a minor note, in monarchies it is usually only the King and Queen who are Majesties, Princes and Princesses are Royal Highnesses instead.

Am much looking forwards to reading more stories by you, whether sequels to this or something else!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

'Leer! Methinks I'm arriving! Yes, I'm definitely arrrrrriving!'

sawyersagesawyersage9 months ago

Fantastic story. I really enjoyed the characterizations, settings, and action.

pho3niliapho3nilia2 months ago

Just my kind of favorite vanilla

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