All Comments on 'A Lady, A Horse and an ex-Marine'

Sorry, but I think that really killed a very nice little story.

There are NO ex-Marines.

Ok so the author made a mistake about the ex-marine thing. That doesn't take anything away from an excellent story and way it was written. Good job.

Where are all the comments on this excellent story? It appears I'm a year behind the times, but as Ecclesiastes said there a time of everything. A great plot, two beautiful characters, a handsome house, a wonderful introductory scene, a neat building in the middle of a grassy, Ohio field, great sex scenes, sex on a horse - how incredibly sexy - a nice breakfast and a surprising email. How did the bowler have time to take a video in the dark?" I'm sorry, I'm so late with this review., but I enjoyed the story very much. I wonder what very means in that sentence?

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Great story, but the only ex marines are those who were less than honorably discharged. Others are former Marines or Retired Marines. Looking forward to Ch 2

Great story, very believable as well.

Great story - very well written and erotic. Quite a bit of horsing around (sorry) loved the progression

I liked this a great deal .

Not over the top and something that could be highly plausible .

To add anything to this story from my perspective I'd have to say nada .

5+ starr

Ooh, something new to try. Now, I wonder where I can rent a horse?

I see someone else caught the Ex-Marine gaff. My son was selected for Major when doing exercises he tore the muscle loose from his shoulder blade. His retirement would have been awesome.

I lament stories that cut off halfway into an ending, but this was the most egregious example of that. Really? You could t have finished this?I see this was written in 2020 so my hopes for part 2 are probably crushed. Dang I was enjoying this.

Bill S.

There are Ex-Marines in the brig.

Bill S.