All Comments on 'A Lady and a Gentleman'

Well written!! I hope there will be more!!

Great little story, lots of intrigue.

What were missing, and plural is required here, we're numerous left out words.

Proof Reading should highlight these. Either read aloud OR, as I have seen suggested by a reviewer, record yourself reading the story. Then, play back the tape and follow the text. This will help you find what's missing

I feel that I should point out to Literotica readers that I am really a writer of transgender romances, with just a touch of sex like the final words of this story. But I have been told that Literotica is really more about the sex, so for now I will be posting steamier tales. But for those other stories I post drafts on my Patreon page weekly and I have 20 anthologies of my short stories on Amazon:

https://www.patreon.com/maryannepeters

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B093BH5CHM

Your point about proofing is accepted - I will try to do better.

Maryanne

A lovely confection - delicious!

Very prolific author on FM and BCTS!

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Oh my. So intriguingly delicious. Please give more of this encounter. I love it!💞