All Comments on 'A Lady in the Streets Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep names clear

The last couple of paragraphs have Anna and Mia talking at the same time.

Gosh, I like the twisted path this story is taking. Multiple personalities, indeed. One doesn't know about the other but they are different (and the same). Like the way the doctor is trying to keep things together and the character development is fine.

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