All Comments on 'A Last College Chance'

Not married, discussed in advance, what’s the problem?

Chucks and whores always play with college friends.

It was well written and easy to read. However, since that is not my thing and a big turn off, I stopped reading at that point, skipped to the end, and rated it 2 stars.

Very creative. Been a while since we had something new. Good twists and turns. What an imagination keep up the good work! *****

It would be better with a sequel starting with her last comment. Since she fantasized about being with a girl, surely she did that, whether hubby knew about it or not.

Unmarried and unavowed multiple partner sex is what it is-

But better editing would help. "Here" was used when "hear" was intended. I suspect Mark got in Jenny's back door first, and further, Mark did not seem that drunk. Hard to believe our hero's memory was fuzzy; they were not doing more booze, let alone drugs, in the dorm room, so his mental state should have been improving as time progressed. Also believe category was wrong; group sex or erotic couplings fits better than LW, since they are not married.

A believable well written story that leaves some detail to the imagination of the reader.