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lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

very well done. Erotic and beautiful

NSFW999NSFW999about 1 year ago

Good story, but some parts feel a bit rushed. The sex scenes are very short at times. Especially compaired to the build up, which is great. 4* all in all for me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

good story. great characters, nice build up.

Pappasleaze!

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601about 1 year ago

What a sad, lonely life he leads. . .

JEALOUS!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Enjoy it now, after kids come you'll have far less romance time, the woman (or women in this case) will be packing a few pounds more weight and have stretch marks.

And if Katlyn get pregnant first, you can probably kiss your marriage goodbye. Jealousy will do that.

WildErotica69WildErotica6910 months ago

Good story - the sex could have been more, deserved a longer write in my view

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