by AlectaShadow
Outstanding - the best story currently on the site. Each chapter keeps getting better! Love the slow burn you have going on, and also the little hints that each time she’s going under she’s breaking and surrendering to it more despite herself. Cant wait for the next!
I’m in love w this storyline. You’re great, need the next chapter and when the story’s through I’ll be here for the next!!!!,
You left out the standard things Kevin would say to Serena while under the spell:
You will not harm me, you will not let anyone else harm me, you will not use your power without my express permission.
Without saying that, this is pretty stupid.