All Comments on 'A Lesbian Fling'

by creamsoda25

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MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Liked the two main characters you created for this short story; each unique and real while the music/teaching background nicely done. You made it easy to visualize the sex they enjoyed with one another. And as you “say” not every night of sex must lead to love for life. The next to last paragraph nice ending minus the “I want a man” line. Seemed out of place/unnecessary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Boy, the casual transphobia really kills the mood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Creansoda25. You write great stories and write them well. Thank you very much.

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